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Thursday, May 10: Screenwriting Homework From Hell!

April 29, 2012 in Meetings

Screenwriters Association
of Santa Barbara

Presents

Jonathan O’Brien

“Screenwriting Homework From Hell!”

Thursday, May 10, 7 pm

Brooks Institute

27 East Cota Street
Downtown Santa Barbara
(805) 617-4503

FREE and open to everyone!

Based on nearly 20 years of teaching all forms of writing, including 14 years at Santa Barbara City College, local screenwriting teacher Jonathan O’Brien has devised fun, creatively demanding, one-of-a-kind, assignments designed to address common weaknesses and misperceptions writers of all experience levels. Understanding why this homework is assigned and the desired results will provide attendees with quick fixes to immediately re-think and improve their own screenplays, short films and stories.

Don’t worry, you won’t be asked to actually DO the homework. But you may be asked to give an example of how YOU would attack the homework. O’Brien threatens to bring his coveted collection of stickers that he uses to reward excellent student work – even though his students are in college!

This time at his Screenwriters Association of Santa Barbara appearance, Jonathan O’Brien has absolutely nothing to plug or promote. Okay, he might wear a t-shirt emblazoned with the cover of his book Right Before You Write (winner of six national book awards). Or maybe he’ll happen to mention one of three writing projects he’s working on and hopes to release before he dies.

What he will do is offer you a free, no-strings-attached way to become a fully credited, professional writer – assuming the check doesn’t bounce.

We can only hope he doesn’t have time to talk about his past lives as a UCLA film school graduate, a network program executive, award-winning screenwriter and filmmaker, creator and former co-host of NPR’s Beyond Words, as well as juvenile hall writing instructor. We probably won’t be able to stop him from talking about his current work as an ever-popular (he wrote that) adjunct screenwriting instructor at SBCC, a creative consultant, and how he has combined 35 years of diverse creative experiences with his passion for helping nonprofit causes (to the tune of $600 million dollars).

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Meeting Minutes for Thursday, April 12, 2012

April 21, 2012 in Archives

by Adrienne D. Wilson

April opened with Lisa Angle announcing our speaker for May would be Jon O’Brien. June is on hold because for the first time ever it coincides with the SBWC dates. Also mentioned was a site called readthrough.com that looks promising. Check it out!

Wild heart energy. That summed up Carla lacovetti as she moved around the room modeling communication. She teaches workshops at the Montecito Library. “Communicating is everything in life,” she smiled as she drew out one of the writers in the audience by asking question after question. “You have to become a Carla lacovettiprofessional eavesdropper and listen to how people banter in everyday life.”

Listening is the writer’s job. “How do you know they talk like that?” You have to be like a psychologist when you listen. “Don’t be afraid to go and talk to people. Engage and you will find out about life.”

Carla quoted Hitchcock on films as being “Life with all the dull parts taken out.” Good dialogue never goes past what is needed to move the story along. It has a rhythm even if only one word. Using the film Sideways, she talked about the one word opener that set the stage for the whole character. “With just one opening line we know the character is a mess, in just three minutes of screen time.”

The reality is that you only have two hours to develop the story, she said. “Structure and timing is everything in screenwriting.” You have to know your characters so well that you know what they will say or do in any given situation. “Do a background study on every main character as an exercise.” This will give the writer the ability to know exactly what the characters are thinking and create believable dialogue. Listening to the dialogue in the trailer for Sideways you can see how fast it all moves. “Remember that you only have two hours to tell a story and you can see how the words are very, very important.”

“Great dialogue is a window into the soul of the character.”

Carla mentioned a favorite book on screenwriting, Aristotle’s Poetics for Screenwriters by Michael Tierno. Take a sneak peek at a review from Variety. The book sounded great, because well, you just can’t go wrong with Aristotle when it comes to dramatic arcs.

Carla smiled at the audience as she said, “No writer, no script. You are ground zero.”

For the story to have universal appeal you want the characters to be as human as possible. “Don’t expose everything,” she cautioned. “Leave something to the imagination so the audience can think.”

For more on this warm and funny writer check out her web page. This quote alone ought to tell you everything about how she approaches writing: “To write well, one must utterly abandon oneself to it. You cannot keep secrets or hold anything back. You must spill your heart out on paper.” – Carla Iacovetti

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Thursday, April 12: Carla Iacovetti

March 25, 2012 in Meetings

Screenwriters Association of Santa Barbara
Presents
Carla Iacovetti

“Believable Dialogue”
Thursday, April 12, 7 pm

Brooks Institute

27 East Cota Street
Downtown Santa Barbara
(805) 617-4503

FREE and open to everyone!

Carla Iacovettia is a published writer and awarded poet who has a passion for words and a knack with the camera. She teaches screenwriting workshops in Montecito and Santa Barbara.

She is a regular feature writer for Ventura County Reporter, and actively works as a freelance writer in various genres, including copywriting, editing, writing business profiles, writing magazine articles for both magazine print and web-based publications, writing news journalism (features), web content, screenplay writing and ghostwriting. She holds a Bachelor of Arts in English and has nearly completed a Master of Fine Arts in Creative Writing. She is the founder and head writer of ScribeMasters, an Internet-based, full writing and editing service.

She was bathed in the fine arts at an early age, beginning with an early introduction to ballet that led to a 22-year relationship. Born in Chicago to classically trained musician parents, she doesn’t remember a time when the arts were not an integral part of her life. Her mother was a professional violinist and a music professor who once played with legendary artists like: Nat King Cole, Sammy Davis Jr., Wayne Newton, and Rod Stewart. Her father is a gifted composer and symphony conductor, and one of the most talented men She’s ever known. Her creative writing surfaced early on. At 16 years of age she wrote a children’s play that was performed in Fresno, California by a community backyard children’s theatre group.

Her interest in photography goes back to her youth and her love of nature. Whether she was skiing down a snow-covered mountain, or basking in the sun at the beach, her camera was always in hand. If she is not creating pictures with words, she enjoys observing and capturing impressionable life moments.

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Meeting Minutes for Thursday, March 8, 2012

March 16, 2012 in Archives

By Adrienne D. Wilson

Let’s just say that the Screenwriters Association of Santa Barbara in March was one of the coolest yet. First, there was an exhibit up at Brooks Institute downtown where we meet monthly. Monumental images in sepia tone of Elephants lined the walls as very strong political statements. I was reminded of the power of the Ashes and Snow exhibit I had seen in Santa Monica several years ago. These images are really worth the visit to Brooks, in addition to the other things lining the walls. So much talent there. The photographer was Nick Brandt, and here are the elephants!

What is the power of film? It’s the power to make things monumental. In movies and in stills. James Khan is quietly monumental. The meeting opened with everyone going around the room and giving their names and what they were working on, for Mr. Khan. Once you see the kinds of films he worked on? We were in the presence of monumentality. And he has done something monumental in our city too. It’s all about making filmjames kahns right here in Santa Barbara. Here is a brief bit of his bio:

“James Kahn is the author of Return of the Jedi, Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom, Goonies, and numerous other novels and novelizations, as well as writer-producer on television shows such as Melrose Place and Star Trek: Voyager. He will discuss his career and some lessons learned, plus tell us what CFSSB is and how to participate in it. Come learn how to formulate a story for a script that could be shot entirely in Santa Barbara with limited cast, location, and budget.”

The meeting shifted to Lisa Angle, President as she mentioned a whole new site for the screenwriters that is being developed to replace the Blogspot page. Lisa mentioned that people will be able to log in as users of the new site and interact with others. Also, it was mentioned that Syd Field will be up at the Ojai Wordfest.

You can’t get much more monumental than Syd Field. A very powerful evening all in all for everyone this March at our meeting. Lots of new faces in the room too, that Brooks graciously provides. But this is Magic! Mr. Khan has launched something called the Community Film Studio of Santa Barbara.

From CCSB’s webpage: “Welcome to the your Community Film Studio Santa Barbara. We are the world’s first not-for-profit, community-operated, feature motion picture production studio. Imagine the traditional community theater…neighbors getting together, volunteering their time to put on a show to entertain the community. Now, take that same idea and instead of putting on plays we’re shooting an original feature motion picture. Community Film Studio. And there IS a role for you to play no matter your background or level of past experience. Even if you’ve never been near a movie set before, we will help you learn to become a vital part of this Community Film Studio. If you think this will be fun and want to be a part of movie-making history, then join us (Tommy Lee Jones would support that choice).”

Can you imagine how fun this is for not just writers but everyone in Santa Barbara? In a word? Monumental. And? An Indiana Jones type deal for the creative community we have here. Lisa also mentioned the Santa Barbara Writers Conference and info about that was passed around. Fantastic for all writers, but the screenwriting classes there are excellent.

Mr. Khan gave the audience a huge back story about how he fell into films by accident. A writer since age nine, he became a medical doctor instead. By sheer luck he was consulted on how to save an alien’s life for the film E.T. — well you can imagine! After that he worked in film and television for all sorts of things. He talked about writing “novelizations” of movies. He talked about being in a writer’s room for television. He claimed TV writers “rule.” It’s really different for film writers. “They can be discounted,” he said. He talked about “writer’s rooms” where three to five writers bounce ideas around together in a giant brainstorm session that can last up to 15 hours. He talked about his work on Melrose Place.

“Novel writers have it easiest,” he claimed. “Scripts are so demanding because they are only 120 pages at most. “TV started as a playwright’s medium.”

“The Community Film Studio is looking for a building. Our mission is to make feature films educational. There will be workshops on writing, editing, direction and sound. As a volunteer you will be working alongside professionals in the industry.” All of this is to debut April 29. But you can read all about it at the link above. Sitting in Brooks, looking at the elephants — it couldn’t have been a more monumental evening to hear about this new film studio here in Santa Barbara.

Because? That is the power of film. Monumentality. Isn’t it?

I’m so excited about our new website!

March 5, 2012 in Uncategorized

You can now submit your own stories to the Screenwriters Association of Santa Barbara website! First you’ll need to “Create an Account” using the link in the right hand column.

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Thursday, March 8: James Kahn

February 21, 2012 in Meetings

Screenwriters Association
of Santa Barbara

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Writer/Producer

James Kahn

“Limping from Hollywood or How I Learned to Embrace the Community Film Studio of Santa Barbara and You Can Too”

Thursday, March 8, 7 pm

Brooks Institute
27 East Cota Street
Downtown Santa Barbara
(805) 617-4503

FREE and open to everyone!

James Kahn is the author of Return of the Jedi, Indiana Jones and the Temple of Doom, Goonies, and numerous other novels and novelizations, as well as writer-producer on television shows such as Melrose Place and Star Trek: Voyager. He will discuss his career and some lessons learned, plus tell us what CFSSB is and how to participate in it. Come learn how to formulate a story for a script that could be shot entirely in Santa Barbara with limited cast, location, and budget.

J. had his first short story published in Playboy magazine when he was still at the University of Chicago. He graduated in 1974 and did an internship in Internal Medicine at the University of Wisconsin, Madison. “I realized that if I were to become an internist, I’d be treating patients all day, being on call all night, running into the hospital at 3 am,” he said. “Admirable, but I’d be missing the pieces of my life I’d left behind. Writing and music.” After his residency at USC/LA County Emergency Room he went to work as an emergency physician at various hospitals around Los Angeles.

He scheduled enough free time to do other things he wanted and started publishing science fiction and murder mystery novels. Then in 1981, Hollywood struck. Kathleen Kennedy called the front desk of the ER where he worked to ask if anyone could help her figure out how to resuscitate an alien in a movie she was producing. J. went to Laird Studios, along with a number of other doctors and nurses, where they did the technical consulting and worked as extras on ET: The Extraterrestrial.

While there, he made the acquaintance of Steven Spielberg, and gave him a copy of one of his science fiction novels, World Enough and Time. Spielberg liked it well enough to assign J. to write the novelization of the other movie he was doing at the same time, Poltergeist. J. wrote it under the gun, in a month, and that was the beginning of his Hollywood career.

In 2010 he began to author storytelling music, and wrote and recorded enough to fill out two CDs. You can find music videos, short films, novels and essays on his website.

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Meeting minutes for Thursday, February 9, 2012

February 15, 2012 in Archives

Author and editor Shelly Lowenkopf spoke to the Screenwriters Association of Santa Barbara in February 2012. He used examples from literature to explain how characters in modern day stories need to be multidimensional.

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Thursday, February 9: Shelly Lowenkopf

January 25, 2012 in Archives

Screenwriters Association
of Santa Barbara

Presents

Nationally Renown Book Editor

Shelly Lowenkopf

“How to Unfriend Your Characters”

Thursday, February 9, 7 pm

Brooks Institute
27 East Cota Street
Downtown Santa Barbara
(805) 617-4503

FREE and open to everyone!

Shelly Lowenkopf has held major editorial positions with general trade, mass market paperback, literary, and scholarly book publishers in addition to executive editorial participation in special interest, literary, and genre fiction magazines. Those companies include: Sherbourne Press (Editor-in-Chief); Dell Publishing (Director, Los Angeles office); Clio Books (Editor-in-Chief); Ross-Erickson (Editor-in-Chief); and, Capra Press (Advisory and Acquisitions Editor). He has seen over seven hundred book projects and hundreds of short story and essay projects through the publishing process.

Currently a freelance consultant and teacher, his clients include novelists, retired and active academics, and the humorist creator of one of the most popular television series of all time.Lowenkopf taught courses in short story, novel, dramatic writing, editing, genre fiction, and revision at the graduate level in one of the most prestigious writing programs in America at University of Southern California, where he was given a Lifetime Teaching Award.

He is a past regional president of the Mystery Writers of America; his book reviews have appeared in the Philadelphia Inquirer, the Fort Worth Star-Telegram, The National Catholic Reporter, The Los Angeles Times, the Los Angeles Herald-Examiner, Publishers’ Weekly, the Santa Barbara News-Press, and the Santa Barbara Independent. He has been the weekly reviewer for the Montecito Journal since 2005.

Lowenkopf has had over 35 books published, along with short fiction, pulp novels, essays and reviews. His most recent book, The Fiction Writer’s Companion, is a guide to terms, concepts, and forms related to storytelling.

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Meeting minutes for Thursday, January 12, 2012

January 24, 2012 in Archives

Screenwriters Association of Santa Barbara met again at Brooks Institute on Cota Street. A stunning exhibit of student work, mostly documentary photography lined the walls as the group made their way to hear Candace Schermerhorn speak about making documentary films.

Lisa Angle opened asking for any announcements. Chuck Kent mentioned an upcoming film called The Secret Ingredient directed SASB Past President Rashi Bahri Chitnis. It will be shown February 2 at the Metro 3. as part of the Santa Barbara International Film Festival.

Maria announced the upcoming play The Jaguar’s Nest by Synergy Entertainment Group.

Members were asked to donate $25 so visiting speakers can be taken to dinner before the lecture and to help with expenses. It’s so little, let’s all chip in because the speakers are world class. Such was the experience of listening to Candace Schermerhorn. As a producer, director, and writer her expertise and passion lie primarily in first person narrative and documentaries addressing contemporary issues. Her credits include work for Children’s Television Workshop, the National Park Service, Massachusetts Council for the Humanities, Harcourt Brace Publishers, American Masters, and Turner Broadcasting. She directed, with Bestor Cram, the independent award-winning documentary You Don’t Know Dick, an intimate film about female-to-male transsexuals. For many years she has taught documentary film making at Santa Barbara City College and was the Director of Programming for the Santa Barbara International Film Festival.

It was amazing to watch clips of the films after listening to the lecture. Candace told the group that documentaries start with footage and more footage. “That’s what the film will become,” she said. “You won’t know what you have till you go back over it.” And even then it might not be what you expect. She explained the process of writing the story from the transcripts. Every single line, every single expression, every sound are painstakingly recorded, and in this way, the story is culled from the masses of footage a documentarian shoots.

She showed the group an immense idea board made of tiny different colored Post-it notes that was the organizing principle behind her film of women in Nigeria called The Naked Option.

“Documentary film making is about what truth is going to evolve,” she told the audience. “Observe as much as possible.” On truth, she cautioned the audience “Whose truth are you telling? All documentaries are exploiting on some level, and what is truth shifts and varies.” Always be prepared to defend your choices. “You are challenging truth and it is challenging you at the same time.”

The bigger story in a documentary is made up of all the little stories, she said. Sometimes it just takes one little line from the transcripts to tie everything together. The lines and the shots of expressions act as bridges to tie the greater whole of the story together. “Train yourself to be moved by stories, to look for them and be moved by them.” What the audience wants is for you as a writer to tell them things, so they can follow you as the writer. “Stick to what you know, if you love something stick to that,” she said. There are basically three questions to ask: What is my story, why do I want to do it and what am I trying to achieve?

Most impressive was watching the film You don’t know Dick. The music, the cutting and the lighting really add to this documentary in ways that show just how masterfully a story can be told in small stories that add up. You can see how this comes together at this link: http://www.myspace.com/video/northern-light-productions/you-dont-know-dick/27328935

It’s just seamless the way this flows as a documentary. The audience was rapt watching too. “Set things up so you can tell the story,” she said. Watch the above and you will see a master storyteller at work. This is how to make the footage flow seamlessly with the music, tapping all the little stories within stories that add up to the bigger picture.

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Thursday, January 12: Documentary Filmmaker Candace Schermerhorn

December 31, 2011 in Archives

Screenwriters Association
of Santa Barbara

Presents

Documentary Filmmaker

Candace Schermerhorn

Thursday, January 12, 7 pm

Brooks Institute
27 East Cota Street
Downtown Santa Barbara
(805) 617-4503

FREE and open to everyone!

Candace Schermerhorn got her start at Northern Light Productions in Boston, MA where she became a staff producer. As a producer, director, and writer her expertise and passion lie primarily in first person narrative and documentaries addressing contemporary issues. Her credits include work for Children’s Television Workshop, the National Park Service, Massachusetts Council for the Humanities, Harcourt Brace Publishers, American Masters, and Turner Broadcasting. She directed, with Bestor Cram, the independent award-winning documentary You Don’t Know Dick, an intimate film about female-to-male transsexuals. For many years she has taught documentary filmmaking at Santa Barbara City College and was the Director of Programming for the Santa Barbara International Film Festival. She wrote, produced and directed The Naked Option: A last resort, celebrating the grassroots mobilization of women in the Niger Delta and their struggle against the multinational oil corporations. She is currently in preproduction of her third independent feature documentary, The Last Utopia, about the ancient seafaring Lapita Navigators and their migration due to sea level rise.